RC - Evaluation of our pitch

Overall, I do think that our pitch did go quite well...

From our presentation we made it clear that we had researched plenty of films to help aid us in our development of our opening sequence, however, I do feel that we could have analysed more films that were even more relevent to our treatment and it is clear that we need to find a film that has a good chase sequence in it, similar to the one we are trying to create. For this we may have to go past the first two minutes of a film.
I think that are audience research went really well, as we managed to get quite a few repsonses, which helped us to idenitfy what viewer's like to see in a teen-horror genre of film.
Another thing that I felt we did well at, was clarifying what we wanted our characters to be like in our opening sequence.
I also found the whole experience quite nerve wracking, as we were the last group to present so we were a bit rushed. However, I do think that it was slightly to our advantage, as it meant that we had put our nerves aside and just get on with it.
To improve our pitch I think that we could have possibly expanded more on our treatment and included photos from a rekkie of another location, other than just the alley way. We could have probably made it more of visually pleasing on some of the slides, as not all of them included the use of colour and images.